haiku 122

squawking —
chicken struggles
in dog’s mouth

One Response to haiku 122

  1. Yikes. Vivid. You know me and sounds: this is a loud poem. And notice how much less of the mellifluous “lips and teeth and tip of the tongue” there is here, and how much more of the back-of-the-throat sounds? The sounds of swallowing and choking. And very bright, loud vowels. Nice poem.

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