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Comment on Author’s Note: About ‘A Late Walk’ by Cletis

Cletis — Mon, 20 Feb 2012 17:14:18 +0000

Bryon, thanks for adding this link. I picked up the Frost allusions well enough to know he would appreciate your story.

Comment on Fiction: Jeune Fille se Defendant by Greg

Greg — Fri, 17 Feb 2012 03:04:28 +0000

That’s a charming story. I don’t think I could have imagined it in a million years.

Comment on Fiction: A Late Walk by Cletis

Cletis — Sat, 11 Feb 2012 01:39:11 +0000

Just beautiful, Bryon. Shaking off a hurt of his magnitude never quite works but you can get to a frozen place where the pain is held at bay. You have a very great soul and I appreciate you more and more. So deeply sorry about the loss of your friend. I’ll put this up next Sunday…

Comment on haiku 199 by Motivated In Ohio

Motivated In Ohio — Thu, 09 Feb 2012 15:46:05 +0000

I am so sorry for your loss. The loss of a four legged family member is very hard to take.

Comment on haiku 199 by Greg

Greg — Tue, 07 Feb 2012 12:57:16 +0000

Bryon, that breaks my heart. She was a good pooch.

Comment on Author’s Note: About ‘A Late Walk’ by Greg

Greg — Tue, 31 Jan 2012 03:08:05 +0000

The allusions lend a tone to this a little like that other story, "Rain". It's the slyness of the references, like the sly punning in the older story. I like them both.

Comment on Author’s Note: About ‘A Late Walk’ by Greg

Greg — Tue, 31 Jan 2012 03:04:28 +0000

More allusions that I could have identified, not having read a lot of those. I got several of them, though.

Comment on Fiction: A Late Walk by Greg

Greg — Tue, 31 Jan 2012 03:01:42 +0000

Frostiana! A very somber and beautiful tone in this story, a deliberate and peaceful pace, like the poem. Now I’m eager to read the comment.

Comment on Fiction: The Barthston Horde by Greg

Greg — Thu, 19 Jan 2012 18:35:52 +0000

Ahhh… “horde,” not “hoard.” Clever.

Comment on Fiction: The Barthston Horde by Greg

Greg — Thu, 19 Jan 2012 18:35:05 +0000

Ooooo, cool. Nicely paced and foreshadowed and all that. It works beautifully. Good setup with the legends of screams.