Ha-ha! I like this one. I get the image of a very young boy taking unwarranted control of a toy car decorating his birthday cake, but it also works as a metaphor that somewhat cynically anticipates future birthdays, gifts, and abuses. Well-expressed tone.
Ha-ha! I like this one. I get the image of a very young boy taking unwarranted control of a toy car decorating his birthday cake, but it also works as a metaphor that somewhat cynically anticipates future birthdays, gifts, and abuses. Well-expressed tone.